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Okay doki! First this is Yaoi! Seccond... well yeah i was practing trying to write a lemon.... then i got embarrassed and hid hence what happend... so its still kinda strong so you have been warned.

Oh and sorry i needed to write this one shot, to make my self write... so im sorry it sucks... But im trying to get back on track
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Well, first off... I just wanted to say how much I loved this pairing. You did so well on the characters too! Thank you. Nowaki was so adorable in this as well. (Well so is Hiroki but he's always adorable.)

I loved reading this. It's okay if you didn't do the smut. It was still very good without it. The couple is a pure love couple anyway. They don't need that much smut anyway. And seriously, smut is hard to make.

I loved the dialogue between them and the one-sided rivalry of Usagi-san and Nowaki.

Over all the story was very cute and I hope to see more from you ♥